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I love you.

Three simple words. At least, it should be simple.

Naruto sighed and put his hand to his forehead. 'Man, this is way too complicated!' he thought and took a sip of his coffee. He looked at his clock. 'At least there is an hour before she comes.' he thought and smiled. He needed more time, an hour wasn't enough at all. He yawned and stood up. "I love you." he whispered.

It wasn't bad at all. At least he didn't stuttered like before. "Hinata." he whispered again. Hinata. She made his mind froze. 'No, no, focus, you need to focus!' he thought, moving around impatiently. He drank his coffee again and sighed. "Hey Hinata. I called you because I want to tell you something." he said but then shook his head. 'That is strange, you're going too straight into it!' he thought. "Hey Hinata. I know it is a bit early in the morning but I will do this quickly so don't worry. Even thought the weather is good." he said but stopped. 'You're going out of the subject!' he thought this time and drank last of his coffee.

"You know what is love right? It is just a word but still it is really complicated. It can make a person wants to laugh or wants to die. It is one of the strongest words in the universe. Well you see, I think that word have captured me in its web. I can't escape it and I won't deny it. You see, I love this person for two years now. Yeah, I realized that I love her at his day, around this time. She was wearing a moldy lemon colored sweater and she was very happy that day." he said and stopped because he was out of his breath. 'No way, it is too long!' thought Naruto and slapped his forehead.

'I knew that I should get more coffee!' thought Naruto and sighed.

He closed his eyes and gulped. "Hinata." he said. There he go again, his mind froze. He couldn't think anything but her. Her laughter, her voice, her smell, her hair, her eyes. "I just want to kiss you." he said the first thought at his mind. "W-W-What?" stuttered Hinata. Naruto smiled to himself. 'It is just my imagination.' he thought. "N-Naruto-kun!" said her beautiful but shocked voice. He felt her hand at his shoulder. That was the moment when he thought 'Shit!'

He opened his eyes to look at her. She was blushed and her eyes looked shocked but innocent. 'She is wearing the same sweater.' he thought and smiled. He knew that it was the time.

He closed the gap between them and kissed her softly. She didn't respond but didn't pull back either. He was fine with that, that was what he waited so he didn't wait for her lips to move and for her to hug him. It is going to be a five second kiss, he always thought. He was too wrong. He hugged her too and they shared their first kiss their, for a long time. "I love you." whispered Naruto when they broke apart for air.

I love you.

Three simple words. Actually it was pretty simple. Just have some courage to do it and some signs from the other.

The story of their first kiss.
Edit: This story now belongs to do the project NaruHina 'First' Series. This is how their first kiss happened.

First Kiss:
Picture:[link]
Story:Here.

First Meeting:
Picture:[link]
Story:[link]

I never believe at the people who said that 'Night is better for art.'

Well with the right song,with the right couple and with the right person I think I can believe it now! This is a decidation to dear :icondinkelsmoothi: Why? Because she is just amazing! Hope you will like it dear!

And I'm really satisfied with this fanfiction!It is just cuteeee!And I bet someone will remember something similiar to this,right :iconsozine2:-chan? :D

Actually,this fanfiction came from idea that I offered her but I changed it a bit.

Oh anyway,hope you guys will like it!And please comment! :hug: :iconcommentplz:

Right Song: 'Never Gonna Leave This Bed' - Maroon 5
Right Couple: NaruHina from Naruto
Right Person: :icondinkelsmoothi:
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:iconkali15:
Kali15 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2011  Student Digital Artist
very cute. :)

naruto being shy around hinata is so cute!
thank you for making this :hug:
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:iconredgirl312:
redgirl312 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)

And I know,right! :D

You're welcome :huggle: :)
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:iconkali15:
Kali15 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2011  Student Digital Artist
:glomp:
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:iconredgirl312:
redgirl312 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug:
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:iconkali15:
Kali15 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2011  Student Digital Artist
hehe :)
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Gosaku Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thi gave me a pretty good idea. Would you mind if I used the same basis for it? The "preparing to say I love you" to someone.
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redgirl312 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah,sure.Go ahead :aww:
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Gosaku Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Many thanks, arigato. I always get mixed up with gomen and arigato. I wonder why?
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redgirl312 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Well I think it is very normal :D I sometimes mix up things like that too ;)
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Gosaku Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I really didn't need any assurance, but thank you. It was kind of you to say.
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